Thursday, June 18, 2009

Happiness-Sonnet

Happiness is inspired in our hearts
It is found when we are feeling our best
There is no need for money or smarts
Because it is found when we laugh or jest

Friendship is one thing that makes us feel bliss
With these friends we can feel like we belong
And with our old friends we can reminisce
It is almost like we can do no wrong

Happiness is the very best feeling
And when believe this so very much
There is nothing else that is appealing
It feels like we can just reach out and touch

It feels great when we are truly happy
Why is this poem sounding so sappy?
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5 comments:

  1. stfu.irisJune 18, 2009 at 5:23 AM

    rofl! i <3 the last line!
    xx iris

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  2. RosemaryJune 18, 2009 at 5:48 PM

    lol thats good as alexia...

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  3. laurennnnn(:June 18, 2009 at 6:10 PM

    hahaha
    that is soooooooooooo much better then mine
    write mine next time, okay?(:

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  4. Jo GoddardJuly 9, 2009 at 8:38 PM

    It is great Alexia - not sure about the last word? sappy???? I love the ideas that you have explored and put across. Good job.

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  5. alexiaJuly 14, 2009 at 6:46 PM

    im just gonna comment on my own poem....
    so yea...
    :) :) :)

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